Who ever said writing was easy wasn't talking about the
whole process. If all we had to do was throw words on the page,
the task would be simple. Ah, but such is not the case. We
have issues to consider; annoying little contentions like
story, characters and plot. Oh, forget the non-fiction writers,
all they have to worry about is a deadline—that and cashing
their checks. Just kidding, no hate-mail please.
If our task wasn't hard enough we have a whole wagonload of
real life concerns vying for our time, attention, and
energy. It's enough to give gray hair to those of us who
don't already have it. Earlier in this series we addressed
those problems, and discussed a few solutions. We'll take for
granted at this point that you have worked out the logistics
of having some time to write. We'll go further, and assume
that you've done some things to give your actual word output
a boost i.e. you've taken some time to unwind, have a comfy
chair, some music (or lack thereof) to create a relaxing
environment, and have an efficient mechanism for actually
recording your words.
You hand-writers out there, I'm sorry I'm just not
going to throw you a bone. Learn to write and type at the same
time would you! Even talking to a tape recorder and typing
from the transcript would be better. Just so there's no mistake. I
don't care if Moses himself used a Underwood manual
typewriter, it is NOT an efficient recording medium. I hear
old curmudgeons grumbling in their beards about new-fangled
contraptions and how they wouldn't be caught dead writing with
them. Sometimes I just wish they would just hurry up and die so
I wouldn't have to hear and read such lame whining by old dogs
who refuse to learn a new trick. There are plenty of classic era
writers who successfully made the transition to electronic word
processing. It doesn't have to be a computer, just as long as it
has a memory and an ability load documents and move paragraphs
around.
When I started out (a longer time ago than I want to admit),
I wrote two novels on a typewriter. I'm glad they were both
pretty crappy or I would have to rekey them into the
computer. Those scripts are UGLY with whiteout, pen
corrections and notes—simply a nightmare. If you have
some cockeyed notion typewritten documents can be scanned
into the computer. Ha ha, fooled you! I hope you're willing
to pay a fortune to have it done. OCR (optical character
recognition) is still far from perfect, despite all the
radical claims on software boxes. Trust me—I moonlight
as a consultant, I've tried to organize processes for this.
Efficient OCR for anything over a few dozen pages is
extremely time consuming and resource intensive. It can be
done if you're willing to spend large to buy mechanical
feeders and specialized scanners. This is simply far outside
the reach of the common person. In the long run, the energy
spent ends up better put toward simply rekeying the
document.
Okay, now that I've gotten that digression (rant?) over,
we'll get back to maximizing productivity.
Knowing what makes a productive writer
A famous author (Sue Grafton) said that it's when she's
really stuck, that she knows she has something viable.
I point to her statement for a reason. Here's a pro who's
written lots of books (and contracted to do the whole
alphabet—B is for Burglar, C is for Corpse, D is
for Deadbeat, etc.) that views the times she gets stuck
as being good. Does she have a screw loose, or could it be
that she's on to something?
What Sue was referring to when she said 'stuck' was
having written to a point in the novel where she had painted
her protagonist into a corner and there just didn't seem to
be a solution to the problem. How could this successful lady
view this as good? Well, for those of you who don't
recognize her name, Sue Grafton writes detective/murder
mystery type books. The key to a good mystery / thriller is
coming up with a surprise twist. Sue gets to that stuck
point in her books and grapples with it until she figures
out a solution.
What does this mean to you? It goes to an important
aspect of a good writing attitude. Just because you aren't
putting words on the page doesn't mean you're not writing.
If you are actively considering what comes next in your book
or story, playing out scenes or dialogue in your
head—you are writing. It's when you can't get
anything in your head that relates to a story that you have
to worry (we'll get to that later). Some people beat
themselves up (psychologically anyway) when there's no
actual tangible product. Unfortunately, this is negative
reinforcement that usually only makes the problem worse.
I've said before, and will probably repeat myself a few
times more. Try to make your writing fun and enjoyable.
Shackling yourself to the word processor might force you to
write, but is that what you want? I doubt it. You want to
rush to the keyboard chortling to yourself, eager to record
your brilliance for others to read. Whether or not you're
really as spectacular as you think is irrelevant; you
enjoyed that 'I'm-so-clever' feeling.
It is amazing how time vaporizes and pages appear when
you are on an inspiration roll. I am only a moderately
productive writer and it I have experienced inspired
marathon weekends where I churned out six chapters between
Friday and Sunday evening (about 60 manuscript pages or
18000 words for me). Is that a lot? I have friends who think
that's impressive. People who write non-fiction will
probably think it's pretty ordinary. On a weekend like that
I probably put in 12 - 16 hours of work. If you do the
math, it's not really special at all. At 40 words a minute,
you can punch out about 24000 words in 10 hours.
If you're one of the people impressed by 18000 words in a
weekend, you're probably interested to the secret formula that
makes it possible. It's simple. The stories I write entertain me.
I take just enough time to consider where the story is going,
then I simply let the characters take off. One of the essential
elements to this is really knowing your characters. Don't fall
into the trap of thinking your characters are extensions of you.
It's true, but don't think of it that way. My characters
routinely look stuff in the eye that would make me soil my
trousers. In fact, it's that "oh shit!" realization that spurs me
on. Like Sue Grafton, when I've painted myself into the corner
and really have to think hard how my heroes will get
out—that's when I really start to have fun. Now, it's not
just writing, it's an engaging intellectual puzzle. When you're
involved enough with the story that the problems challenge you
back, you're not worrying about mechanics, technique or anything
mundane. Now, you're worried about the most important
part—resolving the cusps that matter to your heroes.
This desire to grapple the story problems is energy you can
use to pull you through the task of writing. In order to get
the most of this inertia there's some important prerequisites.
Being able to type without looking at your fingers really
helps. Yes, I know this sounds silly, but if you can type
with your eyes closed it's a big plus. Know the mechanics of
your writing. Familiarize yourself with the process of
writing enough that it's transparent to you. This is
something like-- new speaker, drop a paragraph, quote I hate
English syntax, john exclamation unquote jake said period,
new speaker, drop a paragraph... You should not have to
think about these things. I know I don't. I just
think dialogue. The quotes, attribution, and other
entirely mechanical aspects of the writing just fall on the
page. Until you learn to hear the words in your head (and to
really have the words sing onto your pages, you need to)
learn to babble. That's right. Babble. Many people have
thought I was crazy. They see me talking to myself, laughing
at my own jokes and chortling like there was someone else
with me. Actually, they were wrong, there were
several people—imaginary ones. I'm not embarrassed to
admit I talk to myself. I do it all the time. Until someone
locks me in a padded cell, I'll probably keep on doing it. As
I'm typing this for your eyes, I'm hearing the words and typing
what I hear.
Now, I realize this is a gross over simplification of
something that does not come naturally to everybody. From talking
to other fairly productive writers, I've gleaned that what they
do is some variation of what I'm describing.
The key thing I will reiterate is not letting the mechanics of
writing get in your way. If that—gasp!—means
learning to touch type... well it was about time. You
handwriters, I don't even want to look over there. Unless you
can write shorthand (few of you do), handwriting is abysmally
slow. Handwrite 18000 words over a weekend? If you can do that,
I'll be happy to bow before your magnificence... and the
doctor bill for your soon-to-exist Carpul Tunnel
condition.
Let's revisit what we are discussing—productivity.
At this cusp, it might be important to take a step back and
define what productivity means. In the frame work of these advise
articles, I don't expect you to be suddenly churning out ten
pages a day. Although, that's not an unreasonable goal. If you
can produce 2500 words of fairly polished material in two
weekends of work, that is a reasonable pace for someone who is
balancing a job, children, and a real life. That means
in the space of a year you can have 60,000 words (or a typical
mainstream novel) completed. With a little more dedication (or
less distractions) you can easily do 2500 a week. This is
about 500 words a night, with time on the weekends to polish and
finish what you did during the week. If your writing time is an
hour a night, that's about 1 page in 30 minutes. Now, this is
typical over time. Sometimes, I get into perfectionist mode and
I will spend an hour just fussing with one darn paragraph. Don't
be surprised or despair if that happens. It all averages out over
the course of a big project. At the 10 page a week pace, you can
complete a 125,000 word novel in a year. Productivity, is not
being able to blast out a mess of pages in a short time. It is
the ability to consistently generate pages over a large
timeframe.
Now let's review some key elements of productivity:
- First: Create a productive environment to create in.
This includes a comfortable time and place to do your writing.
Additionally, it includes an efficient mechanism for generating
words i.e. a word processor or computer.
- Second: Do everything you can to get yourself involved
and enthused about your writing. Maintain your writing regime
with rewards, not by chaining yourself in your writing alcove.
Shoot for consistent generation of words, rather than big
exhausting marathons that may burn you out.
- Third: Train yourself to know the mechanics of
writing. This is just basic common sense anyway. If you're a
writer, know the basics of English grammar and syntax (assuming
you're writing in English). Understand quotation, paragraphing,
and general punctuation well enough that it's relatively
automatic. This keeps mundane trivialities from clogging up the
flow of what you're putting on the page.
- Fourth: Don't over-plan your writing. Try to make it
more of a speculative endeavor where you are pursuing the
characters on an action/reaction chain. This kind of writing
goes more quickly because it doesn't require as much thought.
Character A says X, character B responds Y... Sharpen
your role-playing skills and get good at this and you will never
go back.
- Fifth: Remember, that just because you aren't
generating pages, that if you are at least thinking about the
next step in the course of your novel or story that you are
maintaining your writing discipline.
We've addressed issues of productivity and some ways to think
about it. In the next section starts a three section series that
covers writing resources including advice materials, seminars,
conferences, and read-and-critique groups.