Done. Finished. Complete. Wrapped up. Fini. They are some of the loveliest words a writer can say. "So, how's the book going?" It's
done! If you haven't had the pleasure of saying it. Look forward to it. It feels good.
The trouble with being
able to say it, is accomplishing the feat to make it true. For some people, writing a book simply takes
time, sure and steady. For others, the incline seems to get steeper as they go.
The more you do, the more that seems to remain unfinished. Fear not, some tips are
on the way to helping you reach the end of your quest for completion.
First of all, the battle
to get done is a psychological one. From the start, the idea of forging several
hundred pages of coherent story together can seem like a daunting task. This is
a case where people get lost in the big picture, trying to see the project as
one massive work. That's when you hurt yourself, you see the task as something
big. What you should be doing is thinking of it as several much smaller pieces
(chapters) which, when assembled, become the larger entity.
Some people are going to
come at me with talk about the story arc, and plot, and other technical
aspects of the novel. I'll get to that. In the writer series, we deal with the
issues of the task of writing, not
the techniques of it. The craft series complementing these articles go into
detail on plot and story structure.
Focus. See your
entire book as long set of stairs with landings interspersed along the way. At
times, rather than going up, the stairs forward to the next landing go down.
The climax of the novel is the highest landing. From there, the stairs
lead down to a door that says denouement.
Why this complicated metaphor? It's a visualization aid, and a way to
psychologically deal with the plot and story elements of your novel.
Every story has a pulse,
a rising and falling of action and tension. At least, we hope your story
has a pulse. If it doesn't, it's heart is stopped and the patient is dying on
the operating table. By pulse, we mean that the pace, action, and emotion in the
story experience increases and decreases. Action on the increase is like the
stairs going up from the landing. The settling, reflecting, and regrouping are
the stairs going down.
The metaphor works on
several levels. Think of the sections between landings as chapters. Each
stair tread is a scene. In getting to the end goal, you need only only concern
yourself with writing to fill out the current stair-step (scene). Worry most
about the forces working on your characters and how they are interacting. In a
way, good novels write themselves—provided you let them. What sets a good
novel apart from its brethren is a clear sense of the goal. Most importantly, a
clear sense of the stakes and the what motivates the characters. Knowing these
elements of your story make a huge difference in helping you finish.
As an example. We
have a character named Maggie. In the beginning of the story, Maggie's little
girl is kidnapped. The goal is fairly simple—get the child back. The
stakes are obvious—failure means the child dies. Not so obvious, are the
complications and contexts that make the story interesting—that's your job.
The landings or plateaus in your story are the complications that get in the way
of Maggie getting her child back.
I use stairs because the
metaphor suits the rise and fall of the story line. Another appropriate metaphor
is a chain. Writing is best described as a study of action and reaction. In our
example, a mother's child is kidnapped. Put yourself in Maggie's place. What
would you do. That's the speculative process
at work. It's really not a creative endeavor at all, but an analytical one.
Maggie has choices, she can try to solve the crime on her own, or she can call
the police. Of course, there are likely complications that will keep her from
calling the police. However, by some coincidence or twist, a detective finds out
about Maggie's predicament. The scenes (steps) of your novel encapsulate the
elements of the story.
In this example, we may
need a scene which shows the kidnapping of the little girl. We definitely need
one where Maggie learns of the child's abduction. If the detective is to become
involved then we need a scene that shows how that happens. As we analyze the way
the story problem will be resolved, many of the steps (scenes) become
obvious. They won't ALL be obvious,
but many will be. In fact, it's not necessary for you to know every aspect of
the book from the start. As you go, the need for some elements will become
obvious. The development of a love interest or sexual tension. Additionally,
there may be supporting plot threads, like the final settlement of Maggie's ugly
divorce.
Getting done boils down
to not psyching yourself out. Keep your energy high. If writing a particular
scene is dragging you down. Look at your story line and figure out a scene that
interests you. The creation of that material can often be revealing. Cater to
your characters. Really concentrate on being in their shoes and speculating on
their reactions. Relax, and don't panic if you suddenly realize that a character
would do something you didn't expect. Good. The reader probably won't expect it
either. Simply be prepared to make other adjustments in the story to compensate.
The story will always revolve around the characters and what they do. You need
only focus on what is currently happening in order to move forward in your
novel.
Later, in the phase of
editing, you can worry about how pertinent to the story a particular scene is.
Sometimes they aren't necessary. Other times on a second reading, they aren't
enough. That's simply part of the territory.
Let's summate the things
that help us complete. First, try not to think of the novel as one huge
entity. Break down the whole task into the writing of small connected scenes
that are serially linked to one another. Concentrate on the goal and how the
characters will accomplish it; focus on walking a mile in the protagonist's
shoes. Analysis and speculation on what the characters will do next will
aid in determining what scenes you must write. Let the personalities and reactions
of the characters guide you, rather than some fixed outline. If you have an
outline, great, but don't be afraid to deviate from it. Lastly, you don't have
to write all the scenes in order. If you're bored or get an idea for scene that
doesn't immediately follow your latest, fine, have at it. Worry about how to tie
it into the rest of the material later. Writing the novel is sometimes as much a
work of discovery as it is craftsmanship.
The next section deals
with story and character focus, and how it relates to your productivity. We will
work a bit more with the idea of completion as it relates to how much material
you can produce in a particular sitting. In those pages, we'll expand on working
with characters and introspective speculation.