Atomic Narrative


Being A Task Master

© Will Greenway 2000
 

The endeavor of writing is one of those processes that tends to be mystified for some reason. Some of us simply sit down and do it while others fumble around trying to figure out how to get started, how to continue, or how to finish. The main thing is that the process itself is somewhat nebulous and everyone approaches it a little differently. Some writers are front to back people, they simply start at the beginning and work their way through. Some people do bits and pieces, then sew the results together, smoothing and tightening the material into a cohesive whole at the end. Some people write the end, then work backward. In the end, it doesn't matter how it gets done, as long as it GETS DONE. Like most kinds of crafting, writing is something that takes time, and even small projects can seem large through the creative lens. Whether you are a person who completes writing projects with ease, or one who struggles, the idea of atomic tasks should help you to focus your efforts.

Atomic? You might wonder if this is nuclear physics or writing. The idea of tasks goes hand-in-hand with the "principle of threes" or what I like to call "atomic narrative". From the a single sentence up to a scope covering a series of novels, all narrative can be viewed as having three parts: a leading transition (introduction), a body (context), and a trailing transition (bridge). These "parts" simply categorize what the writing is supposed to be doing, or put another way, what _role_ that material serves in. In this theory, the encapsulating role is an "atom". Substances in the real world consist of molecules which in turn are aggregates of atoms. A writing project is the same way, it is a substance made of narrative "atoms".

So, how does this idea of atoms help you? Atoms help you by allowing you to focus your energy on what you should be trying to accomplish. The simplest example is the beginning of a novel or short story. Obviously, the start is going to be the introduction. In order for the introduction to be complete and enable you to move into the "body" or "context" of the project, you must fulfill all of its requirements. You aren't done with the introduction until you've accomplished three things:

This is your "task list" for the initial pages in the encapsulating story atom. Notice the word "introduce"? Each character introduction is in itself an atom that must be visualized and implemented.

I won't restate everything that I introduced in the article on atomic narrative, if you haven't looked at it, it will help crystalize the principle of atomic scaling for the purpose of understanding task mastery.

So, really what we're trying to do is narrow down our creative focus so that we can create in small bite-sized pieces. It helps to visualize this like a cooking recipe. First you decide what dish you're making. Usually, it's a kind of scene. That scene needs a goal or a set of goals, the material isn't written until the requirements of that scope are complete. Scenes can have many different types of goals which we'll list in the task outline. The task outline gives you specific "functions" or "roles" that an atom will serve in. So consider the following list:

Narrative Tasks
  • World / story definition
    • milieu establishment
    • rule establishment
    • scope establishment
    • player / party / aggregate establishment
  • Scene definition
    • scene setting
    • scene refinement
    • scene change
  • Character (Protagonists / Antagonists) definition
    • character introduction
    • character establishment
      • need establishment
      • desire establishment
      • weakness
      • strength
      • initial vector
      • terminating vector
    • character complication
      • tests / proofs
      • downfall
      • redemption
    • character inter-relation
      • relation tone
      • relation foil
      • initial relation vector
      • terminating relation vector
  • Plot definition
    • Problem
      • problem establishment
      • problem complication / transmutation
      • initial problem vector
      • terminating problem vector
      • problem resolution
    • Stakes
      • stakes establishment
      • stakes transmutation
      • character / stakes association
      • reader / stakes association
      • inter-character stakes establishment
      • inter-character stakes transmutation
  • Action
    • establishing vector
    • vector complication
    • vector climax
    • vector denouement
    • vector bridge

This list of 37 tasks covers virtually every kind of fiction chore you might need to perform in the course of writing your short story or novel. The list is broken down by the aspect of writing that the task pertains to. Section E (Action) is a special case as it really isn't a structural element of writing, but more an aspect of scene and plot construction.

Now, if you study the list you will notice that even the tasks themselves have beginning, middle, and end flavors. Anything described using the root words 'establish' or 'initial' is a introductory type task. Things to do with change, complication or transmutation are transitory or contextual, meaning they are typically used when moving between introduction and body, or within the body itself. Termination and resolution tasks are obviously concluding or bridging tasks.

At this point you may still be wondering what this does for you because it's just giving labels to things. If we go back to our recipe analogy, this list is like a spice rack containing ingredients you will use to make your narrative "dishes". If the goal is to do something introductory in nature, it will probably contain introductory type ingredients.

Let's use a typical writing goal like introducing a new character. You as the writer have one primary decision to make; how much space are you going to allot to do the job. Establishing the scope is important because if it is a larger chunk (say a chapter or series of chapters) then this goal may share emphasis with other goals. When the scope has multiple goals, we call them "goal threads". Goal threads are similar to plot threads, they are things going on simultaneously that must be resolved at the end.

For purposes of simplicity, say that we chose the scope of an entire chapter for establishing a character in your book. Now, all this is saying is that the main FOCUS of the chapter will be on establishing that character.

If you look at the list under character and plot definition you will see a large number of tasks. First and foremost you will have the character introduction itself. That is the number one ingredient in your "character introduction recipe". The intro we are speaking of now is the actual instance where this character is first depicted and shown to the reader. This is a scene entry. It, like all tasks, has a beginning, middle, and end. Now, the character's entry into the milieu of your story doesn't necessarily happen at the beginning of the chapter. It may be a part of other events that are unfolding in the course of the story.

Because everyone is different and each plot is different it's difficult to say what precise ingredients will go into your character's first appearance in the story. However, it's safe to say that they will have a description (which is part of the entry). An important ingredient to include will be the initial vector. The initial vector is the direction the character faces in the story. The character can face WITH the plot meaning they are assisting in solving the story problem. The character can also face AGAINST the plot, meaning they are an obstacle or a part of the problem. Like anything in life, the vector is something infinitely mutable. As an example, the character might be an obstacle but not necessarily a part of the main story problem. The key thing is KNOWING what that character's vector is and providing some hint of it in the material that brings the new person into the story.

Needs, desires, strengths, weaknesses, relationships to other characters, all of these things are "add to taste". They are data points about that character that you should know, and make rational decisions concerning whether they should be included in the scope you are working in and where.

That is essentially the power of the task list, it serves as a guide and reminder of things you both need to know about and place within your story narrative.

So, let's look at some example material. Here is a character introduction. This particular section is interesting because it occurs at the END of chapter. This is because the character's introduction serves as a bridge. In this case, the character's appearance is done as a cliff hanger.
Character Introduction Example

The knob on the suite door was tried forcefully, then she heard someone punching the pin codes. The door swung open and three men in suits stalked in, hands gripping the holstered guns under their arms.

"Hold!" The men moved swiftly to opposite corners. Her father held up his hands. The point man tapped beneath his ear twice, obviously keying a subdermal mike.

The man stared at Kat's father, his face and eyes deadpan. "John Hershel?" To her father's nod, he continued. "Agent Mosel, C.I.A."

So, this little bit is the introduction of Agent Mosel and his two gunnies. The fact of his being a CIA operative is bad for the heroine in the story Kat (is the appearance of the CIA good for anybody usually?).

Now, we've introduced Mosel, and we're moving into a new chapter. That new chapter will have new goals. In this particular case, the goal of the chapter is really not to introduce these characters but instead develop the character of Kat by exposing her to some pretty traumatic and trying experiences. In the structure of the next chapter, I actually do a short flashback where Kat has her first encounter with a government agent as a youngster. The cliff-hanger from the previous chapter is there to encourage the reader to push through the flashback to get to the juicy encounter with the CIA heavys. As part of this set up, it helps to know the heroine is trapped in a hospital bed with a crushed arm and leg. So, she's at a horrible disadvantage. That's why this is a character development scene.
Character Introduction Example
EMS CLINIC, WESTERN SEOUL, JUNE 11TH, 2076.

"Just like me..." Kat murmured. She rocked her head back against the pillow. Phantom pains shot from where her right arm and leg should be. She felt a bead of perspiration trickle slowly down the bridge of her nose, and across her lips. "God, I miss Elsbeth," she whispered. "She saw it coming and still couldn't stop it."

"Pardon, Miz Hershel?" agent Trotter said, the phosphor light reflecting in his dark glasses gave his pale skin a jaundiced appearance.

"Nothing. Merely reflecting on the trials of a misspent youth." She glanced at the suite room door where her father had disappeared with agent Mosel. God, she hoped he was okay. She prayed he didn't do or say anything that would get him hurt. It felt as if a giant worm thrashed in her guts. Trapped in this room, her body in tatters, surrounded by C.I.A. creeps who no doubt had a hand in the D.O.D's black-market tech trade. A trade she'd been assigned to curtail. Father had gotten in to help her by running a bluff with the doctors. Now, she needed to run a bluff of her own. First, she needed to find out what they were after. Then she needed to get them off balance, then throw in a curve.

She'd start by warming things up. "So...assassinated anyone interesting recently?"

The man scowled.

"Kinda lippy for a girl with half her limbs missing," agent Driscol rumbled, his blocky features pinched. His hand flexed inside his coat pocket, probably around a gun butt or a sap handle. Driscol was the mean one. Every inquisition squad had a sicko that enjoyed hurting people.

She sniffed. "Why not? Can't dance."

"'Cause someone might cut your fucking head off and hand it to you!" the man snarled.

Kat narrowed her eyes. Over the years, she'd learned that she had less to fear from a barking dog. It was the quiet ones that were murder. Uninjured, she would have dropped this freak just on general pretenses. In the last few years, the overseas black-market operations had really lowered their standards in terms of the prospects they hired on. Some of these guys were serious twitch jobs. "Agent Driscol, you disappoint me. I thought you were the sensitive type."

Face twisting, the big man surged across the room. Trotter stepped in to intercept his partner, putting a stiff arm into the man's chest. "Chill," he growled. He shot a hard look at her. "Miz Hershel, I suggest you keep your mouth shut."

"Yeah, I know, or braveheart there will shut it for me. Guys, I don't know if you're stoned or stupid. I told you already, my father doesn't know anything. He is strictly a civ-op. I'm his one and only milspec project, and you ain't getting shit from me if I'm dead..."

A lot goes on in these eleven paragraphs. The nature of the CIA men is revealed but they are in the story to serve as foils for Kat who is certainly no angel herself. However, we learn things about her, especially her concern for her father.

When I wrote this, I didn't sit down and figure this out as tasks. However, I did formulate it with a clear idea of what I wanted to accomplish within the section. I wanted to establish Kat as a tough girl with a soft heart where her father is concerned. I wanted to bring in her style of interacting with people and her brash and calculating personna. This is the essence of creative writing, to create a world and situation, and move through it with a purpose, bringing to life characters and situations that provide entertainment for the reader.

The task list is a way of tracking where you are and the kinds of things you should be doing in a given section of your story. Let's look at the list in a little more detail and elaborate on each element's significance to the narrative.

REFLECTING ON THE TASK LIST

We've come a long way describing more than thirty seven writing tasks as well as describing elements of setting, characterization, and plot. The task list is there to show you the synergy between these different elements and give examples of how they may appear in your literature.

The task list can't really show you how to write or really tell you what tasks to include in your material. It can narrow down the kinds of things you should be thinking about when you sit down to write the opening scene of a chapter, or introduce a character.

At this point, I've given you all the parts of the puzzle and described in general terms how they fit together. It's now up to you to use the examples to make a better picture of your own writing...